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How to Write a Haibun Poem

Using a form that combines the descriptive qualities of prose with the concise punctuation of the haiku, the haibun presents a picture, scene or moment to the reader. While the haibun form depends on precision and brevity, it is still considered to fall into the category of informal verse. While the haibun was first popularized by Japanese poet Basho in the seventeenth century, it still remains a respected form choice for modern poets.

Instructions

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      Select a scene that you would like to portray. Choose an emotional moment, a small exchange with another person, or a pastoral or urban picture.

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      Make a list of phrases you might want to use. Pay close attention to your use of descriptive language like adjectives and adverbs. Since you are writing your haibun from memory, any detail that lingers with you is worth exploring.

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      Write your opening prose paragraph, keeping it to several lines at most. Focus on the precision of your descriptions while avoiding vague language or melodramatic cliches. Try to create lyrical, concise prose using objective language.

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      Create your haiku next. Make sure that your first line is 5 syllables, followed by 7 syllables in your second line. End your haiku with 5 syllables.

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      Alternate between prose paragraphs and haikus. You can create a single haiku sandwiched between two paragraphs of prose poetry, or continue the process as long as you would like.

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      Edit and review your haibun. Show your poem to trusted friends to ensure that your intended tone and meaning have been conveyed, even to a reader uninitiated with your memory. Ask yourself where the language could be tighter. Make sure to eliminate any repetition of points or language in the haibun.

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