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How to Make Poetic Metaphors

Metaphors are the spices of writing whose meaning goes beyond the literal. They are figure of speech that, by juxstaposing unrelated things, give a new or a deeper meaning to words. Read these two lines from Ezra Pound's "In a Station in of the Metro."



The apparition of these faces in the crowd;

Petals on a wet, black bough



Here, the faces are not like, or similar to, or analogous to the petals; they are the petals. As we read the lines, faces and petals become one and the same thing. Through the use metaphor, a poet mixes different concepts to produce a moving sentiment.

Instructions

    • 1

      Choose a subject for which you want to find a poetic metaphor. It can be an action, a thing, or a person -- real or abstract. Suppose you're writing a poem about unrequited love, which is a common theme in poetry. You see a moon from your window, and you want to find a poetic metaphor for it to use in the poem.

    • 2

      Write down all the words that come to mind when you see the object -- either literally out of the window or with the mind's eye. In the example, it might be crescent, red, cold, silver, etc.

    • 3

      Determine the metaphorical concept. Suppose the writer feels that unrequited love is similar to losing a battle. Here, the metaphorical concept is a battle. Note that the writer could have selected another metaphorical concept. For example, love can also be thought of as a dance, a race or a child's play.

    • 4

      Reflect on other features of the metaphorical concept. What happens in a battle? There's a winner and a loser. Many people are wounded, and many die. There's usually a lot of blood and weapons. Get into the details.

    • 5

      Make the object and a feature of the metaphorical concept you chose identical to create a poetic metaphor from a metaphorical concept. For example, thinking of unrequited love, a poet might write the following line:

      Ah, the moon --a silver bullet.

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