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How to Write Poems With Metaphors

A metaphor is a figure of speech in which two nouns are compared without using "like or "as." Langston Hughes wrote, "Life is a broken-winged bird/That cannot fly," using metaphor. Robert Frost, whose poem, "The Road Not Taken," compares life to a roadside journey, said, "Metaphor is the whole of poetry. ... Every poem is a new metaphor inside, or it is nothing." Poets employ metaphor to discuss abstract subjects such as life, love and death, yet each uses the concept in his own way. The poet e.e. cummings simply wrote, "Life is a place," and that, "Yes is a world."

Things You'll Need

  • Dictionary
  • Thesaurus
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Instructions

  1. Write poems with metaphors

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      Start by making a list of nouns, and then look up the definition of each word.

      Write a list of nouns. Then, use a dictionary to find the definitions, ensuring the word means what you think while jogging your mind with other possibilities. Instead of the proper definition, jot down nouns that could be used in comparison to the words on your list. For example, "airplane" could be called a "bird" or a "horse" to imply that it is a mode of transportation. A romance could be compared with a "dream" or a "nightmare."

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      Almost all poetry uses metaphors, but every poet has his own way of crafting them.

      Choose a solid topic for your poem such as romance, death or childhood. William Shakespeare wrote his timeless sonnets and plays with elaborate metaphors, often describing abstract subjects such as the meaning of life, time, and love. "All the world's a stage," Shakespeare wrote, comparing life to a performance in which people are mere actors.

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      Study a dictionary in order to write your own metaphors.

      Leaf through a dictionary or thesaurus to find ideas for metaphors. Select nouns rhyming with your lines of poetry or simply offering a pleasant or striking ring. Instead of "bird" or "horse," you could compare an airplane to a "gazelle" or "stallion." That "dream" or "nightmare" romance instead could be a "sunbath" or "downpour." Not all poems employ rhymes.

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      Starting with Line 1 of your poem, compare two nouns. Remember, do not use "like" or "as," because comparisons using those words are similes, not metaphors. "The airplane is like a bird," is a simile, while, "The airplane is a bird," is a metaphor.

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      As Shakespeare often did, continue the metaphor throughout Lines 2 and 3 of your poem. "This bird has barely learned to fly," can represent an airplane faltering in air, while "flying is sorrow" can describe the grief of a plane crash to a young husband's surviving wife and children.

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      A Robert Frost poem compares sleep to death by repeating, "Miles to go before I sleep."

      Expand the metaphor for a few more lines. Consult a dictionary or thesaurus again to build upon the metaphor made in Line 1. Ask a friend or a fellow poet to read your work and make suggestions. Plan on rewriting a first-draft poem at least once if it is a school assignment. Every poem deserves a good editor.

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      Visit your local library in order to study poetry employing metaphor.

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