Utilize dialog in your writing. Dialog can be used as a window to show your readers what your characters are feeling and thinking. Instead of saying that a character is angry or sad, you can illustrate that through your character's speech and conversation.
Be descriptive in your language. A good writer can pull their readers into a scene and make them feel as though they are actually there. This can be done by the use of adjectives, adverbs and figurative speech. A phrase such as "The storm outside raged like an angry beast" tells much more than simply telling your readers that it was stormy. It is important not to overdo description, however; focus on the details most important to the story.
Use sensory language in your writing. Sensory words can help to describe what is being seen, heard, tasted, touched and smelled. For example, a sentence which reads "The sound was loud", tells us very little. On the other hand, a sentence that reads "The clamor was deafening," is much more descriptive.
Try to be specific. Vague language will only serve to dissatisfy your readers because it raises more questions than it answers. Specific statements give more information and content, which is much more satisfying and allows you to flesh out a scene.