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How to Build Up a Suspense Scene in a Story

A man carries a briefcase with a bomb in it into a building. A teenage girl takes a pregnancy test and waits for the result. A young man tells his girlfriend he has something important to ask her. All of these scenes have the element of suspense in common -- creating a state of uncertainty that causes excitement and anxiety. Suspense is critical in nearly all genres of fiction, and it is a good way of ensuring that the reader keeps reading.

Instructions

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      Set the mood. The setting of a scene can make a large impact on its mood. For instance, darkness, thunderstorms, sensations of being touched, decay and solitude all create feelings of heightened anxiety. Use sensory details to build on those feelings – a sudden breeze, or an eerie stillness. In the same way, visuals such as dark, heavy curtains or rotting wood can produce similar feelings of apprehension.

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      Create complications. Unexpected dilemmas, even small ones, help amp up the suspense of a scene. Examples include having the main character forget a key that is critical to success, or finding out there are not just two, but three men in the car that's following him.

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      Raise the stakes. Make sure that the price of failure for the protagonist is great and, if possible, increasing throughout the story.

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      Go slowly. A good way to slow things down is by cluing in the reader to a threat that the protagonist is unaware of. By adding small complications, one by one, the scene is slowed to a crawl while the tension continues to mount for the reader.

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      Play up the unexpected. By having a character behave in a way that the reader doesn't anticipate, you immediately create a sense of surprise and increased suspense. For example, laughter at a moment of fear, or catching a glimpse of someone presumed dead. Unexpected details challenge the reader's sense of what is normal -- helping to increase the suspense of a scene.

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